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I gave you everything,
And in return all you gave me,
Were lies and an ocean full of tears
And while I know it's not my fault.



I still feel that it was me not you...
...
Okay let me explain this poem :P
so this isn't about a break up... Well kinda i wrote it with a lot of people in mind...
so ever since I moved to this town I live in now I have never fit in... And I've had friends that are okay for a while but sooner or later they forget me and after years of trying to have friends I am starting to wonder,
is there something wrong with me?
i used to have a best friend but he moved away...
so I always think it is my fault even though I know it is not.
i am always the one to do what they want to do.
to be there for them and listen but it never fails and I just can't take it anymore...
it's to the point where I think anything I say is wrong and I don't want to say something that'll make them go away.
so when I am in a group I usually keep quiet and never say anything.
but on the occasion that I do talk they all act bored and uninterested...
so I am so sorry to complain I hate complaining but ... Yeah :(
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seriousmess Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014   Writer
It is totally them, not you! This strikes a chord with me, I moved to a new city about 3 years ago and spent a lot of that time trying to make new friends with people I eventually realized, could care less if I was there or not. Really it came down to letting go. Stop trying to be the person they wanted - if they don't like you for who you are, do you really want that friendship?
I also guarded a lot of what I said around those people, and after a while I stopped feeling authentic.
After I let go of those people, I felt so free to be myself, and ended up meeting new, like minded companions.
Anyway, the gist is, it can definitely get better, just don't give up on you! Sometimes people just suck :p
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I am glad you met people who were nice :3
and I am starting to learn to let them go, i am hoping that I can find people who aren't like my old friends. Thank you for the awesome comment it made me feel better About the whole thing Hug 
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seriousmess Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014   Writer
Anytime lovely! <3
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blisstruth Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This poem has been my summer so far and This is perfection <3 
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Aww I am sorry about you're summer :( Hug 
and thank you so much, that means a lot :3
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blisstruth Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thnx, and your welcome! you deserved it! your very 
talented with words 
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^^!!! You re too nice :D
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blisstruth Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D 
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