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All I asked of you,
Was to hold my hand,
To be there for me in the end...
To hold on to this rope,
Please
       Don't
               Let
                    Me
                        Fall
And through it all,
I trusted you,
But that was a foolish thing to do...
Cause you cut the rope and let me go,
Laughed as you watched my bones break...
And walked away...
...
But those eyes,
They still give my stomach butterflies,
And even though I know they're lies,
The things you whisper into my ear,
They're so sweet they're almost all I want to hear.
My heart should know better,
But it can't help it,
It loves the thought of you and me together...
...
Lol I don't even know what this is, it doesn't rhyme or anything so I am sorry just getting things out on paper and such
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AbyAngel Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  New member Hobbyist Writer
I love it how you write!!:happybounce: 
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!! :squee: 
Hug 
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LittleWolfDreamer Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Professional Writer
I love how you chose to write this! Like the please don't let me fall part really makes it look so cool!
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much :3 !!! I am glad you liked it :D
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MadamGuillotine Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
Not ALL poetry rhymes.
In fact, mine rarely do
This is really good! Everything flows well together
Plus I really enjoy the formatting.
Good job! And don't think down on yourself so much.
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh thank you so much!!! That means a lot to me Hug 
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MadamGuillotine Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
No problem, darling.
:) 
Welcome to Writer's Meow. <3
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
^^!!!
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AnonymousVulture Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
This a beautifully written poem that displays such emotion that even I can relate to! This is awesome and your should be proud of yourself.
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AnonymousVulture Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
No prob. You deserved it!! :)
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